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Today I'm going to give you a heart
It isn't exactly mine, and it hasn't been torn apart
Not yet anyway
Please try hard not to let it rip, for you see- this heart I've given you..

This heart, oh this heart
Has been drawn, sketched, a work of art
on pieces of tissue paper
The paper was red, I dyed it myself
Do you like it?
If not i'll store it on the shelf

I promised you this a long time ago
this paper tissue heart
I prepped, picked, fussed and now its finally yours

See the scratches?
You can't because there aren't any
I've gone through a lot of tissue paper
to make you my fancy, little, red paper heart

So will you take it... please just take it
Through it away, discard it, rip it up if you please
Just take it, please take it.. I lost a lot finding that shade of red
Doesn't it suit you well? I Hope it does..

Today I made you a paper heart, it took me a lot
Oh but please don't think you have to keep it just because of that!
Keep it only if you want it
Leave it on the ground
Give it to another that you think might like the shade of red


Please though, whatever you do
Do not give it back
Not yet
For it was mine to give, and yours to take
I do not take, and you do not give
that is how we are in the end
You've given me many a nice things to take

And in the end.. All it is, is just a paper heart.

Yesterday I got some paper
Today I made a heart
Tomorrow I'll die
Because I'm sure you ripped it apart
©2005-2009 ~GymkcannaGrl
:icongymkcannagrl:

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And in the end.. All it is, is just a paper heart.

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Something I wrote at the spur of the moment because my brain was nagging me to continue its little first verse. So I did.. and I am really happy with how it turned out. Please all comments and suggestions opened, so that I might be able to use them if I write another poem along these lines. I had fun writting it, and now I hope to have fun reading people's responces. :)

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:iconstarlitrainbow:
I've already told you how much i love it.
which is SO much :D
:heart:
and i shall fave it
:blowkiss:

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Dance, Dance, Dance.
Dance as long as the music plays...
:icongymkcannagrl:
yay! Thanks so much <3 you have no idea how much it means to me that you like it. I write to not only please myself, but others.. And, oh I don't know.. I just love you guys <3
:iconstarlitrainbow:
and we love you too
*doesnt know who "we" are..but whatever* ^^;

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Dance, Dance, Dance.
Dance as long as the music plays...
:icongypsynymph:
Yes, well I tol you what I thought, so yuh. :+fav: (and I've nver used that emote before, lol)

I like the preview pic, too, btw.
:iconhotheadred:
i love this so much. i have to give it a :+fav:. Great, just great
:iconstarlitrainbow:
ou

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Dance, Dance, Dance.
Dance as long as the music plays...
:iconihochisuru-shi:
beautiful poem but you must fix that it say "through"
instead of "threw" and its makin me twitch

great job tho

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Loki/Tanen

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